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Old Mar 15th, 2008, 02:50   #1 (permalink)
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My design

I've been working on the rough draft of my site design for a while, heres what i came up with. Critiques welcome. I'll post it in the website critique forum and soon as I get it in HTML.
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Old Mar 15th, 2008, 09:55   #2 (permalink)
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Re: My design

Again I think it needs another color
Also in my opinion the navigation bar should be bigger, maybe the larger height
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Old Mar 15th, 2008, 10:25   #3 (permalink)
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Re: My design

I Have to agree, it definately needs a new colour!
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Old Mar 15th, 2008, 13:44   #4 (permalink)
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Re: My design

I've been trying everything for colors. Any suggestions?
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Old Mar 15th, 2008, 14:11   #5 (permalink)
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Re: My design

try these colors :
#80B5E1
#8ADF7E
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Old Mar 15th, 2008, 15:23   #6 (permalink)
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Re: My design

I've been trying to work with those colors, but everything I try doesn't seem to work. I attached my most successful attempt. It's just not working.

I'll keep on trying
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Old Mar 15th, 2008, 15:37   #7 (permalink)
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Re: My design

Messed around a bit, and this is what my design looks like with a bit more color.
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Old Mar 15th, 2008, 16:09   #8 (permalink)
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Re: My design

I think you are using a lots of colors, maybe 2 or 3 colors are enough
But its getting better i think
Make your navigation bar color same as logo color, Also the sidebar color
maybe putting the brand in center will make it look better
play with it more
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Re: My design

that one looks better, keep going ( i have been watching... ) - getting better with each go

maybe format the nav a bit more
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Re: My design

Touched up on the colors a little bit. Keep the crits coming. Each nav item has a different font, which one do you like best?
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Re: My design

The nav1 font is better i think, also you can make a tab effect like on nav3 button, and put submenus on its bottom
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Re: My design

now im really getting somewhere. lightened up the logo background, makes the green look better, changed up the nav link backgrounds.

Looking better each time. Any more crits? I'm going to start getting it in HTML, then I'll post it in the website critique section.
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Re: My design

posted in website critique.

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Old Mar 24th, 2008, 05:45   #14 (permalink)
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actually, what is the site for?
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