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Old Jun 10th, 2007, 23:55
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I need some crit on a logo

I would like so critique on this logo I am re-designing for someone. Any suggestions are welcome.
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Old Jun 11th, 2007, 06:37
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Re: I need some crit on a logo

I think it looks slightly dated, but I'm not quite sure why or what could be done to change it (sorry, I know that's not much help, but it's all that comes to mind at the moment!).
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Re: I need some crit on a logo

I like it a lot!
I think I would make one of the squares a different color. Then you have two different boxes coming together. Sort of what your tagline is saying.

I would possibly use the same color for the second half of the business name as well. Burgundy / black?
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Re: I need some crit on a logo

Thanks for the replies!

I will experiment and see how it looks. Or, I may change it completly.
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Re: I need some crit on a logo

Just make it vector!
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Re: I need some crit on a logo

Not bad at all. I like it. Play around with color. Endless possibilities. Just one example:
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Re: I need some crit on a logo

Very nice!!
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Re: I need some crit on a logo

I would say use a different color on the second rounded square...possibly another shade of red?

Then use that same color on the "connecting information..."
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Re: I need some crit on a logo

Thanks for the advice everyone!

I went with a red square and a black square and I used burgandy on the slogan.
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Re: I need some crit on a logo

Well...let's see!
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Re: I need some crit on a logo

May I add something?
I would line up the front and back of the text with the front and the back of the datawise-logo..

Like this:
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Re: I need some crit on a logo

I have already submitted it. Heres what I submitted. I suck at graphics so...
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Re: I need some crit on a logo

Ha, nice I like it. Well done!
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Re: I need some crit on a logo

maby space the font out a lil i think that allways make it look a lil better and maby change one of the boxes to blue and have one of the rod red in stead of just read with blue dots ?? i dno just came to mind
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Re: I need some crit on a logo

Nice! good job!
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