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Old Aug 28th, 2006, 14:10
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hey im making a new site seen as i got bored of my old one it had to many experiments on it that just didnt work. Sooo i want to know what you lot think of my new design this is just a temperary host for now seen as im kinda broke . i havn't finished yet i just wanted to know what you think so far so that i can make it better befor i go doing anything else.

tell me what you think

http://www.freewebs.com/dave89

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Re: freewebs.com/dave89

lol its that bad nobody wants to reply ay
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Re: freewebs.com/dave89

Haha, well, yes.

I suggest looking at http://csszengarden.com/ for ideas and proper coding techniques.
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Re: freewebs.com/dave89

Yikes - maybe this should be moved to worst sites archive?
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Re: freewebs.com/dave89

think mate it needs a big improvement because its like a real beginner my own brother could do a site like that and he doesnt even do websites but with freewebs and everything like piczo for example they have all the things u need like input images so you should start and save get ur own domain and then do a real gd website except one from freewebs beause u cant do that much so it wouldnt look professional ow and 1 last thing and hosting and then ur be on your way to do a gd website if this is wat ya really wanna do
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think mate it needs a big improvement because its like a real beginner my own brother could do a site like that and he doesnt even do websites but with freewebs and everything like piczo for example they have all the things u need like input images so you should start and save get ur own domain and then do a real gd website except one from freewebs beause u cant do that much so it wouldnt look professional ow and 1 last thing and hosting and then ur be on your way to do a gd website if this is wat ya really wanna do
That has to be the longest post on this forum sans punctuation.
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lmao ryan m8 i didnt feel the need or punctuation its was onlt a quick post and i was just tellnig him my opinion of site lmao i bet u feel the same way as well
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Re: freewebs.com/dave89

You should ALWAYS punctuate!!! It removes any ambiguity.

Anyway, back on topic.

Sorry to say it mate but this is pretty poor, I've seen you produce far better stuff. You mind me asking what it's actually gonna be?
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When you posted this did you really want peoples opinons because im sure that you can do better than this and i dont even knwo you!!
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Re: freewebs.com/dave89

iv given up on that site seen as every 1 thought it was horrid i thought it was nice but hey shows what i know dont it i dont no y i try this iv bin makin sites for a year and im still no furthur i might just forget all about it
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Nah don't give up, you should see some of my work. Usually takes me 2 or 3 times to get something decent. My NGIE site is no work of beauty but you should have seen the first puke green version lol. Granted this site looks like something frontpage puked into the toilet but that just teaches you what not to do! Look at it in a positive way. You did it, you learned a bit, now make it better. You rock dude, keep on doing it! I wouldn't be suprised if you came back in a year and blew us all away.
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Don't give up mate, Don't get disheartened. So you made a site that bommed. Do film directors give up when they make a film that bombs at the box office? No. THey learn from their mistakes and try again.
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Nah don't give up, you should see some of my work. Usually takes me 2 or 3 times to get something decent. My NGIE site is no work of beauty but you should have seen the first puke green version lol. Granted this site looks like something frontpage puked into the toilet but that just teaches you what not to do! Look at it in a positive way. You did it, you learned a bit, now make it better. You rock dude, keep on doing it! I wouldn't be suprised if you came back in a year and blew us all away.

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I love you man!!!! lol
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I just hate to see people get discouraged and quit like that.
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