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thanks
Last Blog Entry: The Eagle Has Landed - Young Internet Alliance is Formed! (Feb 20th, 2008)
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Good:
- simple design, colourfull Bad: - text colour (light blue doesn't contrast well with white bg) - table based layout (could easily be done in CSS) - js on the page - your visitors won't care (if they do let them find it) ![]() ![]() - portofolio: a little description of what the project involves would help... Details: these are things I personally pick on... - useless comments: <!--Fireworks 8 Dreamweaver 8 target. Created Sat Aug 05 10:04:20 GMT+0100 (GMT Daylight Time) 2006--> - dreamweaver code, ARGH! "This and all websites featured in the portfolio are © Christopher Smith 2003-2006" Surely that's not right... The content of the websites you design are copyright of the website's owner, not you.
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Will work on theose, thanx
Last Blog Entry: The Eagle Has Landed - Young Internet Alliance is Formed! (Feb 20th, 2008)
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Ah, the Tulip Radio guy. I remember now
I have to say mate... I don't get the feeling of a web designers site when I see those graphics. I get the feeling of cheesy game show or childrens entertainer. Kudos for getting valid XHTML and CSS though.
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i have to say from a design stand point, while it is clean and open, your colored header boxes compete visually with every thing on the page. particularly the main content in that light blue. im not sure the shade of blue is high enough contrast either.
you have skills, just push this idea to the next level with readability in mind. |
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