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Old Jul 19th, 2008, 19:05
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I just finished this site: www.adultsafetyband.com and I would like some feedback.
It's basically a carbon copy of my other site: www.kidsafetyband.com

Thanks for your critique.

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Old Jul 19th, 2008, 19:08
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Re: Website Critique

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Old Jul 19th, 2008, 20:48
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Hiya,

A couple of things:

  • The lack of indication where you actually are is a major usability issue. I was under the impression that I would be on the "Order now" page from the beginning, but when I clicked on "About us" I noticed that the 'Order now' button was still highlighted. Considering your audience I would be making it more clear on what page you are (the same goes for the kidssafetyband.com site).
  • You are listing a number of charities under the "Charities" page. Would it be worthwhile having a stronger call to action about these charities on the main page?
  • Footer is changing from home page to internal pages. Suggest unifying it
  • Size chart: How about providing a but more information on this page and maybe a downloadable PDF giving information about the product as well as the size-chart? That way you would certainly add more value for visitors / potential customers to take home with?
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