Optima - Partitioning Systems

This is a discussion on "Optima - Partitioning Systems" within the Free Web Site Critique section. This forum, and the thread "Optima - Partitioning Systems are both part of the Design Your Website category.



Go Back   Webforumz.com > Main Forums > Design Your Website > Free Web Site Critique

Notices


Reply
 
LinkBack Thread Tools
  #1 (permalink)  
Old May 30th, 2008, 09:59
SuperMember

SuperMember
Join Date: Mar 2006
Location: London
Age: 23
Posts: 61
Thanks: 0
Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts
Lightbulb Optima - Partitioning Systems

Info
Optima - Partitioning Systems
Thumbnails by Thumbshots.de
Technology: PHP,Flash,Static HTML
Upgrade to a SuperMember Account!
New website for a office partitioning company. http://www.optimasystems.com

Constructive feedback welcome
Reply With Quote

  #2 (permalink)  
Old Jun 4th, 2008, 08:10
SuperMember

SuperMember
Join Date: Mar 2006
Location: London
Age: 23
Posts: 61
Thanks: 0
Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts
Re: Optima - Partitioning Systems

Nobody viewed this site yet? The critique forum seems a little quieter than usual...
Reply With Quote
  #3 (permalink)  
Old Jun 10th, 2008, 11:02
SuperMember

SuperMember
Join Date: Mar 2006
Location: London
Age: 23
Posts: 61
Thanks: 0
Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts
Re: Optima - Partitioning Systems

No criticisms at all? Surely someone must have some constructive criticism?!
Reply With Quote
  #4 (permalink)  
Old Jun 10th, 2008, 17:54
unitedcraig's Avatar
SuperMember

SuperMember
Join Date: Oct 2007
Location: Stockport
Age: 17
Posts: 849
Blog Entries: 1
Thanks: 0
Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post
Re: Optima - Partitioning Systems

Sorry mate, not had much time with exams and all.

Good valid code, perhaps try going with a strict doctype?

I like your navigation and the grey box thing, took me a minute to get used to be but good job there.

This is a hard site to criticise, you seem to have most boxes ticked

Great job on the site, to be honest, there is nothing really that i would change, really like it

Craig
__________________
Last Blog Entry: A Royal Mistake (Feb 20th, 2008)
Reply With Quote
  #5 (permalink)  
Old Jun 16th, 2008, 18:22
welshstew's Avatar
Lead Administrator

SuperMember
Join Date: May 2007
Location: inside the outside
Posts: 1,431
Blog Entries: 13
Thanks: 1
Thanked 17 Times in 15 Posts
Re: Optima - Partitioning Systems

Sorry, looking now, although I'm going to be harsh as I know how good you are

good stuff
  • Nice design - the blue and grey work well together and there isn't too much clutter on the pages
  • The addition of colour towards the bottom slightly pulls away from the design at the top, but isn't so bad as to override the entire feel of the site.
bad stuff
  • I am unable to navigate if I turn the images off - try using the gilder / levin image replacement technique fo rthe list navigation. it will solve this problem, keep your accessibiltiy but increase useability.
  • Change your flash file to make use of swfobject, again this is for accessibility and useabilty purposes - for all those without flash or screenreaders, alternative content can be served, such as an image or text
I think that's about it
__________________
WelshStew
Lead Administrator

tierney rides tboard - uk site | xtreme wales - extreme clothing
If you think I've helped, click the "Thanks"
webforumz - facebook | LinkedIn
Last Blog Entry: Web Standards Curriculum Launched (Jul 8th, 2008)

Last edited by welshstew; Jun 16th, 2008 at 18:31.
Reply With Quote
Reply

Tags
glass partitioning, glass partitions, office partitioning, optima, partitions

Thread Tools

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off
Trackbacks are On
Pingbacks are On
Refbacks are On

Similar Threads
Thread Thread Starter Forum Replies Last Post
Keynote Systems Corp. TheSealPortalTeam Free Web Site Critique 17 Jan 18th, 2008 14:47
Keynote Systems Corp. TheSealPortalTeam Free Web Site Critique 21 Jan 8th, 2008 16:43
C++ Systems Developer Web JobBot Job Opportunities 0 Feb 28th, 2007 13:50
Systems Engineering Web JobBot Job Opportunities 0 Jan 24th, 2007 14:30


All times are GMT. The time now is 07:54.


Powered by vBulletin®
Copyright ©2000 - 2008, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
Search Engine Friendly URLs by vBSEO 3.2.0 RC8
© 2003-2008 Webforumz.com : All Rights Reserved

1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36 37 38 39 40 41 42 43