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Hi would be really grateful if someone could check out my new site and let me know if I could improve anything. Also does anyone know any good links for SEO
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Re: Constructive criticism very welcome

Sorry chris, is it for the link above?
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Yes sorry it should have come on the title. www.onlineshopit.com
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Re: Constructive criticism very welcome

well, it's a bit bland really.

Your header doesn't "pop" and the product images you use look pixilated. I would also expect these images to change on refresh, to show me a different set of products.

The google checkout button is just floating at the bottom and not really doing much or adding anything in its current position. It would be better placed on the right hand side, and some emphasis bought to it.

You round buttons on the navigation have squares on drop down, I would stick with all square for consistency. Also when clicking on the round button I would expect it to bring back all products under that category for me to browse, at present they do nothing.

On your product pages, a lot of the space is wasted, why not move the product text, “add to basket” and price to the right hand side so that you can read it whilst looking at the product, rather than having to scroll.

Your search facility doesn’t seem to be working.

On the plus side it validates, which is fantastic, well done.
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Thanks for your comments much appreciated. I am working on a search engine as we speak. I am thinking black shiny buttons for the menu instead of the round, what do yu think? Not sure how I would refresh the order of the results in SQL though would i need a random number function incorporated. Thanks
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