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Old Apr 8th, 2008, 19:26
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Hi there,

Please take a look at my site, and please give me critique on main page. I am currently a student of Internet Application Programmer student. This critique request is part of my eCommerce course requirement. My professor wishes me to experience evaluation input not just from a scholarly level, but also from a peer and professional level.

I only wish the main page to be critiqued on the basis of whether or not it would persuade a consumer to either purchase the item, or at least inquire for further information.

some of the pages, links or buttons of my site, for example submit return and shipping policy pages, order/registration link and submit payment button are still not complete yet, the JavaScript alert box or "currently under construction" message will be displayed because my focus of this site is the effectiveness of the main web page.

Any comments are greatly appreciated, as well as any suggestions. Obviously you can disregard the text until I begin the testing/programming phase.

Many thanks in advance for your help!

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Old Apr 8th, 2008, 19:43
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Re: Please give your critique for my site

Where is your URL?
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OOPs,

My apologize that I forgot to provide my url

Here it is:

http://acadunix.algonquincollege.com...267/index.html

Please critique it.

Many many thanks
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Re: Please give your critique for my site

Well, what can I say?

Sorry dear but your site seems need a big room for improvement. geezz... doesn't really want to say that but since I myself is working in a web design firm and creating a way too quality design, I can not appreciate your work for now.

Try to improve it and get back here of what you've got.

Good luck though...
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