saadi babar's first site

my first attemp....

Sorry... I have to be quite harsh... This site.. pop-ups (fortunately blocked by my browser), annoying ads on the top, the only actual content is way down the page, and what is the search doing there?? Not very nice.

The actual design within the black area is quite ok, but get rid of the ads on the top, and the pop-up please

That thing that follows the cursor is soo annoying, get rid of that and also the ads like ITG suggested.

thanx a lot....4 ur critiques i know thr r a lots of adds but as its free hosting and free domain...dats why its added to my site automatically...

well it's hard to judge it properly
if you are willing to pay little money you can get rid of the ads.

am a little busy in my examzz now a days dats why am not able to gv time to my site...i will definetly do some thing in this regards...

check it now dudes....

mm I wouldl recommend the ads be gone liek others have stated.

I am sure that here is other free web host out there that don't have all that crap (ad)
Try Brinkster

Is it down at the moment?

.tk can burn in hell.

Yeah it is down at the moment, won't load for me either!

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Oh dear.....

I don't think I will say another word...

Jeez.. How many ads!?!?

if money is stil tight, things you could try is using a free host such as tripod, yes they have ads but not in annoying boxes that stay at the top of your screen.

also, the image of the car at the top of the screen seems to be stretched, not a good look.

apart from that, (from a sort of newbies pov), this seems a good site, keep up the good work

and dont let anything make you give up, a mistake is only a mistake if you dont learn from it

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thanx craig its really helping wordz...
thanx for all other critics

Well first thing that I noticed was the ads and the fact that I can't tell what part is navigation, what is ads, and what is text. Also it looks bad to not spell correctly or use shorts words like "u". Just my opinion though. The design itself isn't that good either I'm not sure what to say. The car seems kinda random.

also, if you want a good hosting service, Whym hosting http://whymhost.co.uk/ is a non-expensive and reliable site for you to take a look at, using a non-free host really improves the look of you site

hope thing helps

craig

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How long have you been learning?

in life u r always a learner nortus

Granted.
I only ask because if you had been learning for a couple of weeks then I would say well done, however if you have been learning for a lot longer then I'd be a lot more critical.

I just think its best to be as positive as possible to people just getting into web-design as there is a huge learning curve and most get put off before they really learn anything.