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Old May 28th, 2007, 18:16
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I am begining to build my site url: http://www.nicotinecigarettefilter.com/ and I would apreciate a professional critique on current unfinished design, layout and meta tag content for my site.

Thank you for your time and help.
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Re: Nicotine Cigarette Filter

Content: Fine.
Code: OK - ditch the tables.
SEO: Lots of content but weak SEO.
- Again, ditch the tables to increase your content/code ratio.
- Use semantic markup (Headings and paragraphs)

And back to what I always say: you homepage is /, not /index.html.
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First problem: no doc type!
Next- too many errors. Validate your html

Don't understand the header? Smoking Accessories? This seems like a directory heading instead of website heading. Never understand why people put the web address in the header. People are at your site, why bother wasting that space repeating something they already know.

Ok.. here's my big one. No contact info, no telephone number, country of origin. No way would I ever buy from a site like this. Who are you? Are you legitimate? Omitting contact information is a big trust factor for me. I don't see a return policy or satisfaction guarantee or anything.

Lighters Link is broken.

The design of the site is less than inspiring.
The coding is tables so we all know the site should be hand coded.

SEO is pretty much non-existent.

Content is GREAT! You really hit the nail on the head with the information!

Hope this helps
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Re: Nicotine Cigarette Filter

Thank you very much for all your comments and critique.
As I stated in my post, I am just beginning to build a site, and your comments will help me to correct and address issues before creating and adding other pages such as contact and return policy info pages. I agree these are important and if I myself visited a site that did not have this information I would not buy from that site.
Again, thank you very much for all your help, I will work on this site and once complete, I will notify via post reply, and hopefully I will get better approval and additional help from you.
Best Regards.
David.
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Do come back and show us the changes...
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