Dead On Arrival - Online Comic

Hi again,

http://www.dead-on-arrival.co.uk

This is a project me and a friend have been working on for university, its a flash site which is basically a comic which we wrote based on the theme of an old noir called DOA, with some interactive stuff thrown in.

It isn't quite finished yet, as some of the story paths need redoing, character profile extras need creating (ie. the games/sub stories), and the accessible/html + spanish versions of the site have not yet been implemented.

We've also got a guy in doing soundtracking for the chapters so that we don't run into any legal problems (despite the music being low-br streamed, and the site being a non-commerical student project) so hopefully that should be done pretty soon.

Anyway, let me know what you think, thanks

You have a good start. Couple of things I noticed...I am no flash expert. Loading between chapters seemed a little slow and I am on broadband. Some of the comment balloons moved partially out of range of the frame.


I really liked the page turning. In fact I really liked what you have so far... I am looking forward to seeing it completed.

That's really great!

As Sannbe said, there is a frame that moves too quickly so you can't read the text. It's the one near the frame that says "coffee is about as strong as you get here".

Very nice!!

Great job.

good job .... i think the chapters should be longer thoguh ... so the load time doesnt matter as much