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Old Mar 5th, 2007, 10:15
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Hi All,
please give some comments, behard if you like, but try to be constructive too..
All the best
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Very nice site! Well organized and just the right amount of photos and graphics to keep things interesting.

Sea of Fantasy and Deep Sea Fishing are in English and the rest is in another language. I found that interesting.

You'll want to make use of h1, h2, h3 for SEO purposes. But good job!
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I agree with Linda above ... Nicely done.

As for the code ... Try going for an HTML Strict doctype since you're using divs for layouts

And ... wow ... there are ALOT (read: TOO MANY) divs in there. There's is not 1 <p> in there but I do see paragraphs and not one heading ...

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Nice site. I like that you have it in a variety of langueges. Always nice to see a site willing to translate what is being said. I agee with Lchad and Karinne. It needs a little clean up but it is a good start.
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line up the language flags - they're out of sync on IE.
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hi dan
could you twll mw qhich version of IE is messing up the flasg, I cant see it
thanks for everyone on the comments.Will be going to work with the H1 tags soon.

Also if you are up to it, please give comments on this one: http://www.samda.org

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Also if you are up to it, please give comments on this one: http://www.samda.org
Create another thread review for that site.
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IE6 College arnt very up to date
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I viewed it in IE6 Win2000 with no problem.
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Visually a very attractive design, clean and in keeping with the product.
It’s a nice website. You did it in my favorite color... I love it even more now. Very neat and clean.

Last edited by karinne; Mar 15th, 2007 at 12:57. Reason: Removed the bold.
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The site looks pretty professional, with a quality finish to it but I dislike the rounded corners myself, they work well on some sites but I would have preferred this site without that many. But over all I like the web design you have completed and my other suggestion would be to update the code a little and learn some web standards.
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Looks appealing, though I can't say I like thge idea of usung 2 languages, is it seo-friendly?
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Re: hi, please give a review

Not bad, however your CSS is very sloppy
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Agree with those above, very nice design / layout, the css could be tidied up and the code used could be more specific (a blend of techniques are utilised)... also check in IE7 some of the graphics are not being drawn... also the border graphics around "Welcome to Hotel Papa's Place Homepage" could do with tarting up, especially the rounded edges, also the flags could be tarted up a bit too, and try and get rid of some of the blank space throughout the site... overall tho a nice job

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