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Old Dec 5th, 2006, 20:17
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Hi guys!

Here is a site still work in progress, i just would like to get some feedback on them.

Thanx a lot!

http://www.flowerinstyle.co.uk/original.html
http://www.flowerinstyle.co.uk/try.html

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Re: ow

Much prefer the second one try.html
The font size on the nav is easier to read and I love the red background picking up the red flowers.

I'm iffy on the header in the 3D wispy look. It's a little too light weight for my liking although I get your intention.

Now going out on a limb here... is that how you spell gallery in the UK? I'm afraid to talk about spelling since I flubbed so badly last time!

Did you try the text left aligned?

Some tu[e of rollover effect on the nav would be nice...

Now since the subject is flowers and art bringing out personality, try giving the site just a little more flair. More personality. I really think it needs a stem of flowers overlapping from the red to white, or a border around the white edge of ivy/ribbon/curly q's/ something to add a feminine touch.

It's a good start Chubbs
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Hi guys!

Here is a site still work in progress, i just would like to get some feedback on them.

Thanx a lot!

http://www.flowerinstyle.co.uk/original.html
http://www.flowerinstyle.co.uk/try.html
Hi chubbs,
The photo of the flowers is nice.
I agree with the previous poster; the second link is better.
He's also correct about the spelling of gallery.

It seems you're going for an elegant website. In my opinion the theme would be infinitely more successful without the sharp corners.
Perhaps you could round the corners.

Also, the red bars going into the white box are a good idea but I feel the same about them as I do about the box corners, that they're too sharp. Perhaps you could also round them.

I apologize for being overly critical here but there's one more thing. The font used in the menu could do with being anti-aliased slightly I think.

Good luck, keep us posted on the developments
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Re: ow

Thank you guys!
The client came up with the idea about black and burgundy the dominating colors but i wasnt sure about that. I will definetely try to round the corners. I lso think its too sharp.
sorry about the spelling, correction is on the way! :-)
I was thinking to put some stuff on the top right corners? It seems a bit empty for me

Thank you guys for helping me out!
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