Can you take a look at my Graphic?

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Old Nov 28th, 2006, 20:20
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I'm starting a website - which is in its VERY basic stages - and I have just started to do the graphics for the site and here's my first graphic - the header.
I don't like the devil guy - there was a big empty space there though.
Any and all comments appreciated.
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Dapandyman.
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Old Nov 28th, 2006, 20:33
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Re: Can you take a look at my Graphic?
Wow - wheres the chocolate?

Theres to much black at the bottom!
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Re: Can you take a look at my Graphic?
Yeah - I thought so, but it can easily be cut from the image.
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wheres the chocolate?
huh?
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hehe i like chocolate - what can i say

Seriously - that graphic needs a cube of chocolate!
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Old Nov 28th, 2006, 20:52
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Re: Can you take a look at my Graphic?
Riiiiiiiiiiggght.
*Drifts off and wonders how to incorporate a chocolate cube for Dan...*
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Old Nov 28th, 2006, 20:55
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Re: Can you take a look at my Graphic?
please
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Re: Can you take a look at my Graphic?
looks good, just need to cut out space at the bottom...!!
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Re: Can you take a look at my Graphic?
That's a very friendly looking Devil. Seems like he should be more angry since the name is Tantrum.

It's a good start, but a bit boring... and quite newbie looking...
Maybe change up the swirl to something different other than the glittery looking fill?

How about a gradient background or some lighting behind the devil?

Not sure about the Chocolate...... Dan must be having a craving!
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Old Nov 28th, 2006, 21:16
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Re: Can you take a look at my Graphic?
The question is: When does Dan not Crave Chocolate??
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Re: Can you take a look at my Graphic?
I'm gonna take your points into consideration, edit and repost either tonight or tomorrow.
The devil is gon' get his EVIL on! lol
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The question is: When does Dan not Crave Chocolate??
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Old Nov 28th, 2006, 21:50
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Re: Can you take a look at my Graphic?
Hmmmm pondering over what gradient to use....
The old fashioned B&W or something a bit more special?
Meh.... I'll post it up first then comments can be made about the gradient.
Holy s**t! I have become a doubleposter!
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Re: Can you take a look at my Graphic?
right - not so much a gradient, no more 'glittery' fill for the text, might do some lighting for the devil not sure...


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Old Nov 28th, 2006, 23:30
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Re: Can you take a look at my Graphic?
Oh, that is nice...total improvement from the first one!! That looks much more professional!!
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Re: Can you take a look at my Graphic?
That is now one mean lookin' devil!

Much better! Love the gradient!
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Old Nov 29th, 2006, 17:14
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I still dont think it loooks very professional,Try getting rid of the jagged edges and the soft edge around the letters, i also dontn like whats inside the 2 swoppy things
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Re: Can you take a look at my Graphic?
Yeah - I'll soften up the edges and think up something for the swoops - i didnt have much time last night.
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Re: Can you take a look at my Graphic?
I have to disagree about the gradient background. I don't like it.

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Old Nov 30th, 2006, 19:40
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I will start again - it doesnt look right...
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Ahh...but that is the way you learn!!
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Old Nov 30th, 2006, 21:45
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Re: Can you take a look at my Graphic?
I might continue editing this one but i just had an idea that i think would look good.
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