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artviper.com/test/artviperde/index.html

Hi there,

would you have a look and let me know what you think about this page? Comments, ehancements etc welcome

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Re: artviper.com/test/artviperde/index.html

Pretty darn nice both layout and code wise! Great job!

I have very few issues. Not too keen on the choice for the link hovers. I honestly think it would look better without changing the background of the button, just change the hover color of the text itself to the bright green used for the headers. Should also have something more visible then just color like underlining the text on hover as well. I think this would be far more subtle and keep in line with your polished layout.

You should try to figure out just one H1 tag for the pages and the other headers should be H2's under that tag. It's not against any solid rules to have multiple H1's, but logically there should be one which is the title/focus of the page.

Your links should really be a structured list.

Put your css in a style sheet.

Overall, it's a great concept.
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Frank great site! So clean and polished! The graphics are so nice! What's not to love.
If I had to get really picky, the one thing I would say is that you have a tendency to over optimize your graphics and leave a little bit of a grainy look...

I want your graphic talent!!
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Re: artviper.com/test/artviperde/index.html

Mreine nailed it.
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Thanks for your replies I really appreciate it - and I will have a look if your recommendations will be suitable, which I guess are.

Concerning the css - as this page is not finished, I left it inside the main file for the moment, of course I'll separate it later on.

Once more, thanks a lot for your opinions


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Re: artviper.com/test/artviperde/index.html

you do very nice work. nice book.
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