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Old Jun 14th, 2006, 18:17
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http://www.flyingcards.net/catalog/index.php

Please give you honest opinion on this web page. I won't cry or get depressed I need your valued feedback!
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Cute. The code needs work and there are better ways to disable the image copying than with an annoying message. Placing images with CSS is one way although anyone can always do a screen shot etc... Overall I like it. It is fun and inviting.
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Thanks for that Moojoo how can you tell the codes needs work on it and can you advise
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Re: Be Brutal please!

I like the appearance / layout.
Love the Flash, and the thinking behind it.
Took next to no time to download as well.

Sorry, that's about as brutal as I could be.
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Re: Be Brutal please!

The only thing which stands out for me is that the blue text on blue background needs to eb a darker text.

Really like the site tho
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On a CRT monitor this site is very pleasing to the eye. Looks nice and everything. On my LCD the light blue is a little bit too light. So it's up to you if ya want to make it darker, but if it were me, I'd make that blue a little bit darker.

Nice site though. I like the layout, easy to use.
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Re: Be Brutal please!

Looks quite nice but I don't get it... THis is like the third greeting cards site I've been asked to critique in the last 2 weeks. Is there some kind explosion in the market?

Other than maybe cleaning up your code a little bit there's nothing I can say wrong about it really...
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Hi,
Could you send me the other urls
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Re: Be Brutal please!

Very nice...

Your little JS trick to stop people saving images doesn't do much though.
I can save every image being displayed on your pages and so can most users of these forums. I recommend you...
1. add a watermark to the images
2. Reduce their solution to the minimal
That way they're useless even if somebody does get them.
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I absolutely hate sitting there while a slideshow gives me text to read. I think it's a terrible idea. If it's text, it should be text, so that the reader can go at his or her own pace.

The actual text needs a little formatting, indents for the paragraphs and probably a little spacing.

The idea looks quite promising IMO, and for the most part the site is terrific.
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Thanks guys for all your feedback. Keep it comming
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Re: Be Brutal please!

Theres a bug in your graphics on the menu where you images arnt exactlty inline with one annother, both top and near bottom.

Also you cant click in the text boxes when you want to make your own cards, possibly a firefox issue, dno havent tried with IE, might be worth looking into, as not everyone would think to TAB to em

Concepts nice, cluttery code however, and I think the colours could be alot more complimentary.

I would also change the menu too, not my cuppa, but well.. if your using flash, on pageload you could have the menu as a card that opens up, revealin the menu, simple and cute.. dont know.. just dont have it on repeat lol and .stop ur flash

Looks good, and good idea! is it your own company?
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Re: Be Brutal please!

Hi darude,
Thanks for the feedback.Yes it is our company and is an offshoot of our
www.flyingbears.net offering
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Re: Be Brutal please!

Its quite a pain editing oscommerce eh
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