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Old Apr 28th, 2008, 12:28
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Re: CF Designz Main

home page:
  • i have a dirty mind, so you may wish to reword this "service that will leave the client fully satisfied"
  • the text seems to "spaced for me" try reducing this
  • the cartoon and the icons don't really go together, choose one or the other
  • when clicking on the featured work - i was expecting to go to a page that detailed the work you had done
services:
  • you seem to jump between the first and third person - between "we" and "I" - you need to choose one style of writing and stick to it, otherwise it looks unprofessional
  • the bullets are not aligned correctly towards the bottom
  • also, most clients will not know what these technologies are, so try to expand these to show what it means to the customer
portfolio:
  • i would make each website thumbnail the same size
  • the next button goes to a page that is screwed up (see above post)
  • overview is good, and techologies, but it doesn't tell me what exactly you did, how long it took you, etc.
general comments:
  • I have only looked at this in FF2 so you may wish to review your site in other browsers
  • contact form - better to align the text with the edge of the input box
  • make your footer sexy - it's boring
I think that is enough to be getting on with
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