Quick gestion fella - do you have any clients?
I dont mean to be rude - so dont take it that way - but you might find that people are coming to ur site and thinking what the fluff.
Are you trying to sell merch? flaunt ladies? or sell websites?
Split the site into three in need be - make the text short and punchie - pay a copyrighter if you cant do this yourself and make yourself market specific weather that means men in suites or pictures of city scapes.
What you have to think is what is going to make people choose your product over someone elses!
just my 10p worth (god i need a signature

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