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Old Apr 10th, 2008, 22:25
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Hey guys. I don't know if I am allowed to post .jpgs or if it has to be HTMLized first. If I can't do this please let me know and I will delete this. I was just wondering if I should go further with this or to scrap it and try something else. What do you guys think of it so far? I can't disclose the name or logo, but hopefully you can still get a general idea (hence the blurring).

The url is to the jpg is http://ninegatesgrads.com/mockups/ho...0v3_edited.jpg

Another version: http://ninegatesgrads.com/mockups/home_page%20v5.jpg

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Old Apr 10th, 2008, 22:27
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Re: Website for a web application

if you upload it to a server and put the web address of it that will be fine

failing that you could attach it to your post
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Re: Website for a web application

So is that fine? How I put the url to the .jpg in my post?
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Re: Website for a web application

www.yourwebsite.com/picture.jpg

or whatever root it is
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Re: Website for a web application

Sorry about that. I phrased my response horribly. I meant:

Is the way I posted the url to the .jpg in my first post ok.

But it looks like it is. Thanks
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yea that fine, although its very slow
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Re: Website for a web application

It seems a bit bland to me, try adding a bit of depth to it?

Also the content gradient seems a bit dark to me.... a personal rule of mine is never to use pure black or white in designs, dark and light greys that look almost like black and white tend to work, but i find them easier on the eye.

What are you using to design this? windows or mac because you have to bear in mind that windows is darker than a mac.

Also your content text seems a bit big to me? Mainly because it's bigger than the nav?
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Re: Website for a web application

Ok I've got a new version up here : http://ninegatesgrads.com/mockups/home_page%20v5.jpg

I'm on Windows right now, but I change the workspace to Macintosh RGB to see how it looks. I think I'll make the font-size a bit smaller on the content and nav of my latest version. What do you think? How does it compare to the first?
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Re: Website for a web application

why are you blurring everything out?
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NDA (Non Disclosure Agreement). I can't put out sensitive information so I had to blur out what it does, what it's called, and the logo. I know it makes it hard to see, but it's required.
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