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Old Mar 19th, 2008, 21:49
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Hi, I just finished my portfolio website and I was interested in some feedback.

http://ofpixel.com/

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Re: My porfolio

Nice work Matt. Love the logo and trail effect. You clearly have an eye for design

Also, good to see valid code! And strict too!

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One other thing. The page transition is pretty swanky, which I like. But, if you want to design accessible websites, this is not going to hack it.

You need to re-write your javascript to degrade gracefully. Anyone without it is going to leave promptly (since they can't get anywhere). Plus as an accessible web designer, it's a must.
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Thanks for the input. I fixed the text, and the JavaScript as well. Turns out it wasn't hard at all to fix.
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Re: My porfolio

Love the affect when changing pages, i agree with aso's points.

Not much else i can say really, valid clean code, great job

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Re: My porfolio

Hi

Love the look of this website, well done on making this website look great.

A few things I think could improve this website, firstly the navigation, looks to plain and boring in my opinion, and definately the text is too small, I think the text needs to be bigger for one, and there needs to be some kind of rollover effect.

I agree, the transition between the pages is great, good work on that.

Only one other thing I can see that I would suggest changing, the screenshots of your work on the homepage, I would make the gap between them bigger, because currently it looks like they are all together.

Change this minor things, and you are on to a really nice website.

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Re: My porfolio

yep, i would echo all the other points all ready made about this site.

the top nav needs some work for sure, and made a little larger but apart form that, very nice. well done.
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Thanks for all the replies. I made the navigation a bit bigger, and fixed the recent work thumbnails.
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I like the the logo. Someone goes to psdtuts.com i see.
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i like it
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Love it, and I would leave the Navigation just as it is.
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