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Old Jan 20th, 2008, 20:49
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Hi everyone, this is my first thread and website, I´m very new to this
I think it lacks of content at the moment, Just need some feedback positive or negative and any ideas,
Thanx everyone in advance,
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Re: About Spain

I am sorry but this is not a professional looking site. On both your un-necessary splash page and home page the image is far to pixelated, if you must have an image as a background you need to get a better quality one, the current image is far too small.

This site looks as if it has been put together rather quickly. There are no headings on any of your pages, and there is no consistency throughout, some pages having no background colour, some having blue, some yellow??

I am sorry if this seem harsh and i realise that this is you first attempt.

http://www.webforumz.com/css-forum/3...how-to-use.htm

http://www.webforumz.com/beginner-re...ml-and-css.htm

Maybe you want to take a look at these and try and apply them to your site.

Do not get disheartened though, every-one has to start somewhere, at the end of the day you have gone to the time and effort to create a site and people will respect that.


Another thing, when saving your files, do not include space in them.

The file name Living in Spain.htm gives the browser this:

Living%20in%20Spain.htm

spaces shouldn't be in htm(l) files, removing them is your best bet

hope this helps

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Re: About Spain

I think Craig summed it up pretty well. Definitely sort the pixellated images and page names.

Plus although it might have been your preference, Times New Roman font is a big turn off
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Re: About Spain

How long have you been learning HTML?

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Re: About Spain

Dude.... thos images hurt my eyes!

and for the love of god, stopp putting spaces in your directory names! that's why your URLs are full of %20
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Thaanx a lot for the replies,
I´m getting couple of images toghether now, those were the first ones I´ve found, gonna get the 20% out of the way, I just didn´t know why, I´ve been doing this for about a month,
Thank you all kindly, I´ll pop up in the forum from now and again,
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there´s definetly a lot of staff I´ve got to learn, I´m very basic on web design, cheers
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Re: About Spain

nice work on changing the names, but when you are doing this make sure that they are all consistant.
eg.

Cost.OF.livingG.htm
LivinginSpain.htm
RENTALS.htm

What ever you choose keep it consistent throughout the site.
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PS, for a professional look the most used are all undercase, not initial capitals

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index.htm(l)

not
Index.htm(l)

See minute44's post below
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it can cause problems... especially if your servers are unix or linux based.
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