Ahh, never mind I clicked the second link. I am going to be 100% serious here, keep in mind flash is my specialty.

1. When the word "Design" falls it stops at the bottom of the stage, but just before that the word "Creation" fell right though the stage. Design either needs to fall though, or creation needs to stop. I would go ahead and have design tween off!

2. Next the Refresh part. The blur on that was just too slow. If you want to do a blur...make it FAST!

3. When the photography bit comes in to play, your animation is not covering up each letter...looks weird.

4. I am not really sure what the point of the "your" going around the "0" is? But it is not going around the 0 to great, you should look into having the object be more precise...it seems to be changing it position as it goes around...kinda weird.

5. The "Click Here to Enter" arrow needs to be a different color. Purple and yellow? You have not used or integrated purple up to that point. Try another color...like Black!


6. This animation needs SOUND. Flash is something intros are used for a lot. If you are going to use flash…then get some sound in there.

Other then those few minor things...looks GREAT!